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I Wonder..I wonder what It'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will it be soft and gentle.
Or rough under the metal.

Will I feel relieved
Or hard to believe.

I'm not so sure anymore.
I just need to find a cure.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will people start to cry
Or will they leave with a sigh.

Will my moments be treasured
Or my life span left measured.

I really don't know
But I'd really like to go.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will my friends stand by my coffin
Or whither and be forgotten.

Will they look into my crying eyes.
Or my heart full of lies.

I just want to end it all.
I'll go j

Finally..People won't be there, even if I cried.
People wouldn't care, even if I died.

Everyone starts leaving.
While I continue on bleeding.

Nobody can hear my cries anymore.
I don't understand what life is worth living for.

I'm slowly giving up.
As I push the dagger through my gut.

I let out one last tear.
Before I cry out my only fear.

I've died here alone.
And no one is even home.

I'm left in the dark
While others seem to part.

I'm dead, I'm done.
Oh look, I've found a gun.

This will surely finish it.
No more life, not one bit.

I hold it to my head.
Boom, And I'm dead.

Finally, it's all over.

DeathI don't know why I'm writing this,
all I have to say,
Is death may be a life style,
That we'll all pick up one day

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paren(senryu)theticalthese lenses
(comprised of
assumption, fear, and
ignorance)
bend not only light,
but the source.

remove them,
a caul, from your eyes;
(be filled with
joy, peace, wisdom and
compassion)
see again.

all and everyall the sand
on all the beaches
in one grain;

every star
from each galaxy
in one spark;

all the truths
from every wise man
in one breath;

tao.

semantoumthe things you may say,
how you may say them;
the thoughts you purvey,
how you display them.

how you may say them,
your word and your deed;
how you display them,
your grace and your greed.

your word and your deed
may well be a lie;
your grace and your greed
may well be despised.

may well be a lie,
a soothing untruth;
may well be despised,
perceived as uncouth.

a soothing untruth,
the thoughts you purvey;
perceived as uncouth,
the things you may say.

life boatif I
hold that gun,
pull the trigger tight on a

sunny
with a
chance of pain;
life changes in an eye-blink.

mistake,
worlds quake.

and picking up the pieces
won't be done
on this
morning

you will be left with no one
waiting at
the door.

muse's refrainin youth's ignorance i did sing;
i made tatters of silken wings,
of blithe patterns i knew nothing.
what i thought art was just clatter;
i made tatters of blithe patterns.

i am now older: aged and cured;
and still my muse (when she is heard)
i can't refuse. i am so lured.
my writing's now less coarse and crude,
and still my muse i can't refuse.

suck the fystemwe each find our own road to peace.
by our faith's theft we become geese;
we stand bereft: lambs sheered of fleece.
deep in the wasteland we are left;
by our faith's theft we stand bereft.

is and is not each play their part.
when there are names, know end start;
please know the frame is not the art.
to not may be the greatest shame;
when there are names, please know the frame.

the roots are strangled by the tree;
emasculate the pow'rs that be.
the church and state enslave the free.
we're chattel to what we create;
emasculate the church and state.

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trees in winter: a haigaby =deinktvis

Literature / Poetry / Spiritual / Visual & Found Poetry

13.12.11

a haiga collaboration with *offermoord. the original piece can be found here: [link]

the poem is a haiku:

trees in winter

fractal base laid bare,
fibonacci in bold type;
absolute value.

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s fuyu saijiki contest [link]

Form: haiga

Region: central europe (belgium)

Season: late fall

Category: plants

Kigo: fractals in nature, mathematical patterns in nature, the bareness of the trees

Description: there is an obvious fractal nature to bare trees, the fibonacci sequence describes the pattern of brancing seen in trees and plants, the trees are at their 'absolute valuse' being bare of leaves

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~retransmission Dec 16, 2011 Traditional Artist

good description and atmopshere of the winter!

=deinktvis Dec 16, 2011 Student Writer

thankses

*offermoord Dec 13, 2011

that´s great! interesting how words can interact with abstract visuals..

=deinktvis Dec 13, 2011 Student Writer

inderdaad!

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