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with words we're weaving,
this warp and that weft;
a sea we're sieving,
seeing what is left.


this warp and that weft,
a cosmic symbiosis;
seeing what is left,
an unrevealed gnosis.

a cosmic symbiosis
'tween thought and matter;
an unrevealed gnosis,
in quantum patterns.

'tween thought and matter,
a caldera of creation;
in quantum patterns,
re-embers to awaken.

a caldera of creation,
roiling quiddity;
re-embers to awaken,
sweet ubiquity.

roiling quiddity,
for never was no thing;
sweet ubiquity,
the threading of being.

for never was no thing;
a sea we're sieving.
the threading of being
with words we're weaving.
18.2.12

a pantoum with the highly talented ~OnyxPhoenix. this piece can be found in her gallery here: [link] . my lines are in italics.

please share any :+fav:s and comments with her!
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angry-hobbits Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is quite cool.
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:icondeinktvis:
deinktvis Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Student Writer
thanks, let my collaborator know :)
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:iconangry-hobbits:
angry-hobbits Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sure thing :)
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silvernium Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really happy with this one :)
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
as am i :) great work!
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