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these sails are filled
with windsome words
the ship, though: stilled.
i watch the birds
wheel overhead;
airborne ogham,
meaning unread,
is muse's locum.
24.4.12

a piece of free verse

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:iconexistencewesummonyou:
"airborne ogham,
meaning unread,
is muse's locum." - what a lot of fun to be had in seven words.

Poetry!
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
indeed, on both accounts!
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alapip Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nirvana approached , very closely?

one of your best, i think, Chris.
'windsome' - nice word!

;)pip
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
thanks, pip :)
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alapip Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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magbhitu Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
crane's legs mingle
in the vacuum
mist rises from the lake
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Writer
wow...that is amazing.
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magbhitu Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
call and response, brother. gratifying to see you groking the oghams.
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
i see we once again tread the ground of parochial traditions in our searches:)
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