First, let's start with the picture. The picture itself is great. The colors and beautiful and the lighting is great. I love the clarity and the way that his picture focuses on the stones and the water. I, myself feel inspried by this picture. It is truely great. It is creative and mixes in nature along with man-made things. Now, let's focus on the poem. Even though it is short, it is great. It made a great impact on me when I first read it. It shows deep thinking. It also shows that the picture inspired the writer. Let me just finish by saying, I really, truely love this submission.
Ok, so you've done better. I don't think the title fits the senryu and neither does the artwork. Your senryu takes a southern approach to me , so if you wanted to keep the writing portion you could change the picture to a boy in overalls playing in the rain or a puddle. The title would also have to change into something of a southern slang phrase. If you wanted to keep the artwork and title,+ your senryu would have to be more tranquil but also match the color aspect you're trying to capture in the picture. Just on a general note the first line doesn't quite make sense, so editing that might be necessary.