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i thought i'd write a tongue twister:
one that doles out oral blisters,
has folks begging 'mercy, mister!'...
i just missed 'er, i just missed 'er.

so...that leaves me writing aimless,
monologuing blithe and shameless.
should i be accused of sameness
am i blameless? am i blameless?
2.12.11

a monotetra [link] for :iconprojectdfc: 2012 [link]
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Halcyal Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
A charming, churning bit of versing.
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:icondeinktvis:
deinktvis Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
:thanks:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012   General Artist
I love reading pieces that make me smile. :heart:
Congratulations on the DLD, good sir! :squee:
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:icondeinktvis:
deinktvis Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
thanks for the grin and the :+fav: :D
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   General Artist
It is I who should be thanking you for that, lovely sir! :glomp:
My absolute pleasure! :heart:
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012   General Artist
:tighthug:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
congrats on the DLD friend !!
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:icondeinktvis:
deinktvis Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
thankses!
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:iconrlkirkland:
rlkirkland Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, your efforts have net you a DLD. :party:
:clap::clap::clap:
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